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Scholastic says one third of the world is obese and the government is trying to stop it. Is it really up to the government to prevent kids from eating junk food at school? The government is passing a law saying that junk food will be banned from schools. When kids eat junk food at school it is no different than when they eat junk food at home, they’ll end up just eating too much healthy food, and they will be taking money from schools. The amount of junk food Americans consume needs to decrease, but it is up to the individual to do this.
Scholastic says one third of the world is obese and the government is trying to stop it. Is it really up to the government to prevent kids from eating junk food at school? The government is passing a law saying that junk food will be banned from schools. When kids eat junk food at school it is no different than when they eat junk food at home, they’ll end up just eating too much healthy food, and they will be taking money from schools. The amount of junk food Americans consume needs to decrease, but it is up to the individual to do this.
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A boy stares at his father’s gun thinking,”This could make the pain stop.” Emotionally hurting someone leaves the same, if not worse, wounds than physically hurting someone. Phoebe a young teen that was bullied took her life 4 years ago because of these wounds. The bullies that did this to her need to be punished by the government because the fear of being arrested could stop them from acting this way, there are laws against harassment, and the bullies caused a death, even if it was accidental. All victims and families of victims of bullying deserve justice.
A boy stares at his father’s gun thinking,”This could make the pain stop.” Emotionally hurting someone leaves the same, if not worse, wounds than physically hurting someone. Phoebe a young teen that was bullied took her life 4 years ago because of these wounds. The bullies that did this to her need to be punished by the government because the fear of being arrested could stop them from acting this way, there are laws against harassment, and the bullies caused a death, even if it was accidental. All victims and families of victims of bullying deserve justice.
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The stars are dazzling, you finally see the Earth as you’ve seen it in pictures, the ship explodes, and you die. Though space travel may seem fun there are many risks to it. Virgin Galactic a space travel company is making the first ever commercial spaceship. This should not be allowed because there are health risks, it cost too much, and the ships will only be tested a couple times before actually sending real people. Space travel should be illegal for untrained people.
The stars are dazzling, you finally see the Earth as you’ve seen it in pictures, the ship explodes, and you die. Though space travel may seem fun there are many risks to it. Virgin Galactic a space travel company is making the first ever commercial spaceship. This should not be allowed because there are health risks, it cost too much, and the ships will only be tested a couple times before actually sending real people. Space travel should be illegal for untrained people.